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Post by Breyan Norrey Wed Nov 21, 2018 10:45 am

They might need to rescue Phoebe. And get to know each other better during the process.

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Post by Breyan Norrey Mon Dec 10, 2018 2:33 pm

Just checking to see if you saw my post from Saturday Morning. I started a new Topic.

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Post by Serethiel Thu Dec 13, 2018 9:59 pm

Sorry! I never got this reply which is weird. I'm going to reply right now.

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Post by Breyan Norrey Fri Dec 14, 2018 7:31 pm

Would you be interested in writing in another PBEM Im starting? Im gathering a few players now. Quite the mix bag of strangers, but if you're up for it, I can explain the parameters. We could still continue this story though.

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Post by Serethiel Fri Dec 14, 2018 7:32 pm

I’m actually doing a few storylines already and not sure I could take on another one right now. Sorry!

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Post by Breyan Norrey Fri Dec 14, 2018 7:43 pm

No problem. Just thought I ask. We write well together, and I always like to add a good writer to the bunch so they have an example to follow. Plus it's always nice to have a female writer.

It's a bit darker, 'coming of age' story where a group of kids (14- 15 year olds) find themselves on an adventure of sorts. We all start a zero level and work (through roleplay and good writing) into learning their skill ranks, class skills, languages, cantrips, talents, etc.

If you change your mind, let me know.

I'll post to our story tonight. I have to duck out and get my daughter from cheer practice.

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Post by Serethiel Sun Dec 16, 2018 9:10 am

So I had two thoughts regarding new characters. One is that I would like to bring in a character at some point in the future who was once almost engaged to Breyan. Since Breyan avoided the question with Serethiel there could be some unfinished business between Breyan and this woman. I'm thinking that Breyan asked this woman to marry him recently and she turned him down. This plot twist would involve Serethiel and Breyan going to Breyan's home village/town though. I'm picturing this encounter happening right at the beginning of Breyan and Serethiel's relationship, making him choose between a safe, conventional relationship and one that might cost him his life.

The second would involve Breyan's sister, during the same visit to his home. What I'm imagining is that something happens and Serethiel saves his sister, though as she is saving her life her ears are shown, revealing to his sister that she is an elf. His sister completely freaks out, believing Serethiel is going to kill them all and Breyan has to convince her otherwise. Later on, his sister becomes very close with Serethiel and completely supports them

What do you think of these?

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Post by Breyan Norrey Sun Dec 16, 2018 2:29 pm

Boy we think a lot alike. I was going to do something similar with another woman. But we can do both without you knowing what Im doing first. Smile

His sister works well too, but we wont get to that until he and Serethiel return from the rescue.

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Post by Serethiel Sun Dec 16, 2018 3:10 pm

That all sounds good to me!

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Post by Serethiel Wed Dec 26, 2018 5:43 pm

Hey! I just wanted to check in and make sure everything was alright since I haven’t heard from you in a while.

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Post by Breyan Norrey Wed Dec 26, 2018 6:08 pm

So sorry. Im good. Just busy with the holidays. I should be good to write a bit now. I'll add something tonight.

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Post by Serethiel Wed Dec 26, 2018 6:09 pm

That’s fine! I completely understand.

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Post by Serethiel Mon Jan 14, 2019 11:00 pm

Hey. I was just checking in since I haven't heard from you in a little while. Just wanted to be sure everything was ok.

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Post by Breyan Norrey Tue Jan 15, 2019 8:59 pm

So sorry. Life just got busy there for a bit. Im still interested in writing if you are. My bad.

It seems like I do that a lot to you. Sorry.

Give me a bit and I'll fire things back up.

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Post by Serethiel Tue Jan 15, 2019 9:44 pm

That’s ok. I completely understand. I’ve been sick this past week with Bronchitis and a sinus infection.

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Post by Breyan Norrey Wed Jan 23, 2019 9:18 pm

I know Ive been bad. Just really busy. But I do plan on starting back up at some point. So sorry.

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